Light

Posted on July 17, 2017 by Biko

Consciousness

sinking

sank

blissfully

underneath blankets

and blank eyes

thirsting for sovereignty

after living

five feet above ground

in worlds

filled by empty words

and broken ideality

Subconsciousness

collapsing

vibrations

forge their

way in pulses

through

still air

Reality

slowly brought

to actuality

Erasing

fragments

of brief

escape

created

prior to

7.34 am

–

Gates opened

Eyes blank

Floating

4 thoughts on “Light”

lorettasworldblog July 17, 20178:30 pm Reply

I love that. Wow!

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1. Biko July 17, 20178:48 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so much! Glad you do.
  
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ivors20 July 20, 20174:25 am Reply

I made a conscious effort to read your verse, a bit hard to read due to the one word per line, but after reading again, I saw the light !!

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1. Biko July 26, 201712:29 pm Reply
  
  That’s great to hear! Yes, I split the verse to purposely portray the haphazardness of the light. Thank you reading!
  
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