Phones silenced
as reliance
dissipates
into
Calls made at
half-past
memory lane
at two am
As dependence
is deflected
away
from
Hearts that
remain guarded
and emotions
unwanted
© Hudson Biko
Photograph: Erik Cid
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Great words and nice photo. Love the idea of a two AM phone call. Thanks for sharing.
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Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and the kind words.
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very emotionel beautyful poesie! Hard to have a guarded Heart. Seams so hopeless for emotins!
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Thank you so much! I think after a while, you get rather used to it and it becomes normality. Rather hopeless maybe.
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getting used, and especially to handle this, is a good way.getting used, and especially to handle this, is a good way, I can imagine. When heart aches for someone a long time, there must be a way. I can not imaginge why god shoudl send so much love, when it is not meant to be. I can imagine. So as long heart aches for someone, there must be a way. I can not imaginge why god shoudl send so much love, when it is not meant to be.
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I think it’s that mystery that makes it what it really is and it’s up to us to find that way… Whatever it is.
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sorry for my first comment, my cursor is always jumping, and I see this doublings only after posting…is there a possibility to make a correction afterwards? I hope you can understand my comment.
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It’s perfectly fine! I don’t think there’s a way to fix it but I don’t really mind. 😊
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Nicely word, and I loved the line, “Calls made at half past memory lane”
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Delighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you!
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for me the “half past memory lane” is better than no one…it´s something real, to cling to…so I loved it like you ivor!
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Thank you so much! I’m thrilled that it resonated with you!
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Yes, the circumstances also seem to be a little awkward. But you just do not sit inside, what drives people around …: (
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and YES: That impresses me sustainably!
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Laden with emotion
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Yes. Lots of it on this one. Thank you for reading!
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Maybe just too much feeling to deal with?
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Maybe this is how it’s dealt with.
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On the other hand, there can never be enough feelings ….. strong feelings are put through!
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Exactly!
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I will!
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