there’s still times i feel the words
hammer against
an ellipse
of lips
and
i have
to remind
them that they can
finally leave the wards in which they always lived
© Hudson Biko
Photograph by Pim Chu
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Deep and poignant lines so well composed.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoy it! 🙂
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Yes absolutely Biko.
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that is so true, you ´ve got the taleent to express very much in a few words!
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Yes absolutely true
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that is very poetic and beautiful! Is it the words you have to remember or the lips?
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Thank you Anie! 💕✨ A bit of both really. The words to leave and the lips to speak.
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💕💕💕..a tender,poetic and lovable answer…there are so many different things happening at the same time, which determine our present and built up our future…why not communication our inner needs, even if they are a bit egoistic?
Humans are a constructional defect. They are caught between nature and awareness. Unfortunateely our nature to be egoistic, destroys the world ( no one accuse animals eating each other, because this is the balance of nature). And our bewareness knows that to serve the infinite of univers we should be wiser. But I think we should find a way to live aware with nature but serve also our own person to be a lucky human. So, yes, remind lips amd words…be brave!
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Be brave indeed! ❤️✨
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: )…yes we do always our best….❤️
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I hope my best will be enough…
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I think as long as it’s enough for you. Nothing else really matters. ❤️🌻
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Thank you Biko, you said exactly what I already thought ….I think it is enough for me!…: )
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