roses have thorns
and yet
we still
find a way
to call them
beautiful
;
i’m trying to
figure out
why we still
call ourselves
broken
© Hudson Biko
Photograph by Kendall Lane
roses have thorns
and yet
we still
find a way
to call them
beautiful
;
i’m trying to
figure out
why we still
call ourselves
broken
© Hudson Biko
Photograph by Kendall Lane
Wow, this is so meaningful! Thank-you(:
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So glad it resonated with you. Thank YOU for reading. 😊
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Nicely done!
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Thank you so much!
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The beautiful, who hurts and the loving, whose heart is broken. A wonderful poetry and once again the proof that outward appearances are not decisive. Do not seek a beautiful body but a loving soul.Thank you for your smart Thoughts!
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Such an insightful comment! Thank you so much for reading.
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Thank you, I´m glad that you liked it!
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your thoughts show your sensitivity and how deeply you deal with your thoughts, that is very beautiful!
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That’s a beautiful thought and compliment. Thank you Marvel!
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Wow so nicely worded poem, Biko. Loved it.
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So glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much!
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Yes absolutely Biko. Welcome.
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Your poem provokes beautiful and meaningful questions.
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As I did to myself. Thank you Ivor!
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Quite a thoughtful poem you got there.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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I LOVE THIS! I write stuff somewhat like this too! Could you please give it a read? It would mean a lot to me
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Thank you so much! I’d love to.
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I like the way your mind works 😊
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Oh thank you! ☺️😄
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I just wrote a poem so similar to the beginning of this one – so crazy!
Yours is beautiful x
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Haha! Thank you Josie. I’m glad you enjoyed it. You have some beautiful poetry as well. 💕
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thank you very much! I’m honestly just dabbling – normally I prefer to write prose but I’m struggling to find time!
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Well, keep on dabbling, they’re great posts!
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Why can’t we accept that sometimes we have pain, like everyone else, to accept our flaws when they don’t define us, but can teach us and help us become.
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Yes. Exactly. We often don’t take our ‘flaws’ as part of our being when imperfections are their own form beauty.
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